留学Essay写不好？或许你只是少了一次润色

写出一篇篇短文(Essay)是申请美国大学不可或缺的环节。和国内的大学申请不同，他们不需要自传，因为这些资料从其他地方都可以看到。再由回答一系列设计过的问题，学校希望可以更加了解一个人的个性、态度、人格特质，当然还有写作能力，进而决定要不要录取你。新西兰代写选了一篇美国的申请文书可以让新西兰同学们学习学习里面的套路。

好的essay的标准只有一个：能让审查委员想要录取你。面对成千上万份的申请，审查委员能够停留在每个人身上的时间很少，要能够在短短几分钟内抓住大家的心，令人印象深刻，才是关键。也因此，从一开始的构思、草拟、下笔、修改、校定，往往要来回好几个礼拜，直到最后的完美。

以下是大概的步骤：

1.构思Research the topic

2.下笔Writing

analyze well-written essays

brainstorm your own ideas

a compelling title and introduction

3.修改Revising

Correct errors

Remove unnecessary words

4.校定Have someone read your paper

而常见题目包括：

1.长文(通常250-650字)

Common Application

Some students have a background,identity,interest,or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it.If this sounds like you,then please share your story.

The lessons we take from failure can be fundamental to later success.Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure.How did it affect you,and what did you learn from the experience?

Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea.What prompted you to act?Would you make the same decision again?

Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve.It can be an intellectual challenge,a research query,an ethical dilemma–anything that is of personal importance,no matter the scale.Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.

Discuss an accomplishment or event,formal or informal,that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture,community,or family.

Harvard

You may wish to include an additional essay if you feel that the college application forms do not provide sufficient opportunity to convey important information about yourself or your accomplishments.You may write on a topic of your choice,or you may choose from one of the following topics:

–Unusual circumstances in your life

–Travel or living experiences in other countries

–What you would want your future college roommate to know about you

–An intellectual experience(course,project,book,discussion,paper,poetry,or research topic in engineering,mathematics,science or other modes of inquiry)that has meant the most to you

–How you hope to use your college education

–A list of books you have read during the past twelve months

What specific plan do you have,if any,for using the education you hope to receive?

Stanford

Stanford students possess an intellectual vitality.Reflect on an idea or experience that has been important to your intellectual development.(250 word limit)

Virtually all of Stanford’s undergraduates live on campus.Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate—and us—know you better.(250 word limit)

What matters to you,and why?(100 to 250 words)

M.I.T.

At MIT,we seek to develop in each member of our community the ability and passion to work collaboratively for the betterment of humankind.How have you improved the lives of others in your community?(This could be one person or many,at school or at home,in your neighborhood or your state,etc.)

Describe the world you come from;for example,your family,clubs,school,community,city,or town.How has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations?

Tell us about the most significant challenge you’ve faced or something important that didn’t go according to plan.How did you manage the situation?

2.短文(少于150字)

Stanford

Name your favorite books,authors,films,and/or artists.

What newspapers,magazines,and/or websites do you enjoy?

What is the most significant challenge that society faces today?

How did you spend your last two summers?

What were your favorite events(e.g.,performances,exhibits,competitions,conferences,etc.)in recent years?

What historical moment or event do you wish you could have witnessed?

What five words best describe you?

What matters to you,and why?(100 to 250 words)

Yale

Why does Yale appeal to you?

The two qualities I most admire in other people are…

I am most proud of…

I couldn’t live without…

Who or what inspires you?

What do you wish you were better at being or doing?

Most Yale freshmen live in suites of four to six students.What would you contribute to the dynamic of your suite?

Brown

Why Brown?

Tell us where you have lived–and for how long–since you were born;whether you’ve always lived in the same place,or perhaps in a variety of places.(100 word limit)

We all exist within communities or groups of various sizes,origins,and purposes;pick one and tell us why it is important to you,and how it has shaped you.(100 word limit)

M.I.T.

We know you lead a busy life,full of activities,many of which are required of you.Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it.

Although you may not yet know what you want to major in,which department or program at MIT appeals to you and why?